How to improve writing (no. 134) (opens in new tab)

A subhead from a The New York Times article about yesterday’s disgraceful Supreme Court decision regarding TPS and deportation: The split mirrored one that has long divided Americans: how seriously to take the president’s loose, provocative and sometimes ugly remarks\. Note to the Times : it’s long past time to drop the decorousness\. Better: The split mirrored one that has long divided Americans: how seriously to take the president’s frankly racist remarks\. Related reading All OCA How to im...